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如何完成一篇动态小作文

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本文详细讲解了如何完成一篇柱状图动态小作文
<p>首先是审题的步骤:</p><p>第一步,我们通过时间点的个数:1995-2002,判断出这是一篇动态的题目,而且时态为过去式。</p><p>第二步,我们通过第一段文字的审题,发现主语是telephone calls,而不是total number of minutes ﹙in billions﹚</p><p>第三步,通过图片的审题,我们再次确定主语是telephone calls,时态是过去式,而单位是billion minutes,而不是billions minutes。</p><p>最后一步,因为是year>2的情况,我们遵循线的数量的规则:图中线(柱)的数量小于等于3,所以一根柱子一段。</p><p> </p><p>接下来我们开始写作:</p><p align="justify"> </p><p align="justify">在加词减词换词以及how+主语+changed的帮助下,我们完成了黑体字改写:</p><p align="justify"> </p><p align="justify">The bar chart gives the information about how UK telephone calls of three types changed during the period from 1995 to 2002.</p><p align="justify"> </p><p align="justify">我们先描写第一根柱子:宏观到微观</p><p align="justify">Local fixed line calls were the highest throughout the period ﹙宏观介绍第一根柱子的特点﹚. It ﹙主语一致,使用指代﹚ increased from 72 billion minutes in 1995 ﹙微观:交代起点,注意单位﹚, peaking at approximately 92 billion in 1999 ﹙微观:交代最高值,注意分词作状语﹚, followed by a gradual decline back to the 1995 figure at the end of the period in the question ﹙微观:交代最终值,注意连接两段趋势的分词作状语:...., followed by....﹚.</p><p align="justify"> </p><p align="justify">描写第二根柱子:宏观到微观</p><p align="justify">National and international fixed line calls were always the second most popular type ﹙宏观﹚, and the number ﹙主语一致,使用指代﹚ grew steadily from 38 billion in 1995 to reach 61 billion minutes in 2002 ﹙没有很多微观信息需要描写,抓住起点,终点即可﹚.、</p><p align="justify"> </p><p align="justify">描写第三根柱子:宏观到微观</p><p align="justify">Although mobile calls still lay last in the question, the speed of its growth was quite considerable ﹙宏观﹚. Standing at about 2 billion ﹙分词作状语﹚, the figure ﹙主语一致,使用指代﹚ was on a slight rise to about 13 billion minutes in 1999. The next 3 years witnessed a dramatic growth in mobile calls to around 45 billion minutes. </p><p align="justify"> </p><p align="justify">补充:国际班的孩子可以回忆一下exponential是什么数学方程,和这个线长得是不是很像。所以我们也可以把这种前慢后快的增长趋势称之为exponential increase。</p><p align="justify"> </p><p align="justify">最后我们收尾:</p><p align="justify">Overall, although local fixed line calls were still the most popular in 2002, the gap between the three categories had narrowed considerably over the second half of the period in question.</p>
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